Презентация по английскому языку раздел Личное письмо

Подготовка к ГИА/ЕГЭ Английский язык Английский язык Написание письма личного характера Что нужно знать, чтоб удачно сдать экзамен? Предмет«Правила игры» Личное письмо Является продуктивным заданием. Формат личного письма позволяет проверить базовые навыки и умения. Знакомство с нормами вежливости ИЯ. Умение отвечать на вопросы. Умение задавать вопросы. (11 класс)Умение различать официальный и неофициальный стиль общения. Отличия заданий «Письмо личного характера» ОГЭ (задание 33) Написать 100-120 слов (+- 10%: 90-132 словаЕсли учащийся написал более 132 слов, проверяется только 120.Учащийся дает ответы на три вопроса друга по перепискеЕсли учащийся написал менее 90 слов – работа оценивается в 0 баллов ЕГЭ (задание 39) Написать 100-140 слов (+- 10% 90-154 слова)Если учащийся написал более 154 слов, проверяется только 140.Учащийся дает ответы на вопросы друга по переписке и задает 3 вопроса по упомянутой теме. Если учащийся написал менее 90 слов – работа оценивается в 0 баллов Содержание ОГЭ (задание 33) Обращение (неофициальный стиль).Благодарность за полученное письмо. Ссылка на предыдущие контакты.Ответы на 3 вопроса.Завершающая фраза (неофициальный стиль).Подпись (только имя). ЕГЭ (задание 39) Обращение (неофициальный стиль).Благодарность за полученное письмо. Ссылка на предыдущие контакты.Ответы на 3 вопроса.Задать 3 вопросаЗавершающая фраза (неофициальный стиль).Подпись (только имя). Текст должен быть логически выстроен, разделён на абзацы и соответствовать письменному этикету. Учащиеся должны использовать разнообразные грамматические структуры и лексику, средства логической связи соблюдать правила орфографии и пунктуации. Приветствуются допустимые сокращения: aren’t, I’m…, I’d…, don’t, I haven’t…, … Отличия в критериях оценивания заданий «Письмо личного характера» ОГЭ (задание 33) 4 критерияРешение коммуникативной задачи- 3 баллаОрганизация текста-2 баллаЛексико-грамматическое оформление речи - 3 баллаОрфография и пунктуация- 2 баллаМаксимально-10 баллов ЕГЭ (задание 39) 3 критерия1. Решение коммуникативной задачи- 2 баллаОрганизация текста-2 баллаЯзыковое оформление текста (лексика, грамматика, орфография и пунктуация) – 2 баллаМаксимально-6 баллов Основные ошибки учащихся при выполнении задания «Личное письмо»: непонимание формата задания; неумение представить полный и точный ответ на запрашиваемую в письме информацию; неумение запросить информацию в соответствии с коммуникативной задачей (11 класс); ошибки в оформлении организации текста (написание города, даты, подписи и завершающей фразы, отсутствие мостиков, средств логических связей между абзацами, нарушение логики); языковые ошибки; превышение или уменьшение нужного объема письма. Какие ошибки относим к лексическим? : ошибки в неправильном употреблении слова в контексте;ошибки в словосочетании; пропуск слова, когда это не влияет на грамматическую структуру предложения; ошибки в словообразовании; орфографические ошибки в словах, которые меняют значение слов. Какие ошибки относим к грамматическим? Артикли, предлоги, видовременные формы глагола, неличные формы глаголов, степени сравнения прилагательных и наречий, местоимения, порядок слов и т.д. Пропуск слова, влияющего на грамматическую структуру предложения (вспомогательный глагол). ОГЭ You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Andrew. …My dad bought me a laptop yesterday. It’s cool! Now I can play computer games everywhere! But it drives my mum crazy. She says that all computer shooting games are stupid.What do teenagers in your country do in their free time? Do you like or dislike computer games and why? What do you use computers for?... Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions.Write 100-120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.  ЕГЭ You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Mary who writes:…At the lessons of biology we are studying different plants native to a certain area. Could you tell me which trees are the most wide spread in Russia?As for our news, we are in Scotland. What a relaxing place it is! I wish I could describe how beautiful the local lochs are…Write a letter to Mary.In your letter:• answer her questions• ask 3 questions about her holiday in ScotlandWrite 100—140 words.Remember the rules of letter writing. Структура письма личного характера Адрес (вверху, в правом верхнем углу, лучше краткий- город, страна, дата) Обращение (слева , на отдельной строке) Ссылка на предыдущие контакты, т.е благодарность за полученное письмо, извинение, что не ответил раньше (после благодарности) Основная часть или - ответы на вопросы зарубежного друга Задать 3 вопроса другу (11 класс) Заключение, напоминания о дальнейших контактах Завершающая фраза Подпись автора (имя на отдельной строке, без точки) Организация текста Noginsk,Russia 05.12.2016 (3 слова) 5, Rabochaya Street,Noginsk,Russia05/12/2016 (6 слов) Noginsk,RussiaThe 5th of December 2016 (7 слов) Адрес. Дата. Обращение -Dear Tom, -Dear Ann,  -Dear Andrew,(В конце обязательно ставится запятая) Благодарность за письмо Thanks (a lot) for your (last) letter. Your last letter was a real surprise.I was glad to get your letter. It was great to hear from you! / It was great to hear that… / I was happy to hear…       Ссылка на предыдущие контакты. -Your last letter was a real surprise.-I’m glad you passed your History test!  -Sounds like you had a great time in London! -Great news about your…!  Извинения -Sorry I haven’t written for so long but … -Sorry I haven’t been in touch for so long.-I'm sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. Основная часть (Body of the letter) (С новой строки!) -So, you asked me about… -(In your letter) you ask(ed) me how… Средства логической связи Связки в начале абзацев: As you are interested in…; Well, I can say that…, In your letter you asked me about …, I`d like to tell you that…, Actually (Generally)…, So, By the way, As for me…Связки предложений в абзацах: Firstly, Secondly, Also, However, Moreover…Связки внутри предложений: and, but, because, or, …Минимальное количество линкеров: не менее трех! Объясните, почему вы заканчиваете письмо: Well, I’d better go now as I have to do my homework.Anyway, I must finish my letter now because my Mum asked me to help her with the washing up.I have to go now. It’s time for my favorite TV show. Упоминание о дальнейших контактах Write (back) soon!Take care and keep in touch!Drop me a letter when you can.Hope to hear from you soon.I can’t wait to hear from you! I look forward to hearing from you. Завершающая фраза (написать на отдельной строке, поставить запятую)Love,Lots of love,All my love,All the best,Best wishes, Подпись (имя на отдельной строке, без точки)SashaMarina Noginsk,Russia11/06/2016 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you after such a long time! I’m sorry I haven’t answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. (основная часть письма) I have to go now. It’s time for my favorite TV show. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best, Ann (57 слов) ОГЭ You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Andrew. …My dad bought me a laptop yesterday. It’s cool! Now I can play computer games everywhere! But it drives my mum crazy. She says that all computer shooting games are stupid.What do teenagers in your country do in their free time? Do you like or dislike computer games and why? What do you use computers for?... Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions.Write 100-120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.  Вопрос 1What do teenagers in your country do in their free time? So, you asked me about teenagers in my country. Well, they (teenagers in my country) like to play computer games too. Well, they (teenagers in my country) like to watch TV (do sports/ read books/ surf the net). As for me, I like to play chess/ prefer outdoor games. Вопрос 2Do you like or dislike computer games and why? Оf course, I like computer games because they are fun.As for me, I like computer games because they let me do things I never could in real life. On the one hand, I like computer games because they touch on all of the things I love, on the other hand, this occupation takes me a lot of time. Вопрос 3What do you use computers for? I use computers for doing my homework. I use computers for studying English. I have a special program. I can do grammar exercises and learn new words there. I use computers for practice my English with my friend from London. Noginsk,Russia11/06/2016 Dear Andrew, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you after such a long time! I’m sorry I haven’t answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. So, you asked me about teenagers in my country. Well, they like to play computer games too. As for me, I like computer games because they let me do things I never could in real life. I use computers for practice my English with my friends from other countries. I have to go now. It’s time for my favourite TV show. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Masha 106 слов Приветствие Начальные фразы письма Заключительные фразы письма Концовка перед подписью Прочитайте фразы (1-15), которые вы можете употребить в различных частях письма. Подумайте, где именно. Заполните таблицу их номерами.1. Waiting for your letter.2. Thanks for your letter.3. Dear Chris,4. Say hello to everyone.5. Best wishes,6. How are you?7. Yours,8. Lots of kisses,9. Hello Julie,10. Bye for now,11. Love,12. All the best,13. Dearest Jane,14. It was nice to hear from you.15. Well, that's all for now. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 В этом письме перепутаны части. Расставьте их по порядку и заполните таблицу их номерами (A-G).A. JackB. Unfortunately (к сожалению), its happiness didn't last long. It had a terrible stomachache and we took it to the vet. What a great man! He wasn't afraid of Bobby's sharp teeth and gave that naughty dog a real treat.C. Dear Mike,D. Anyway (как бы то ни было), I'd better go now. Mum wants me to help with the shopping before I do my homework.E. Best wishes,F. Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you! I'm really glad your dog's much better now.G. Well, you know the kids in my class are really friendly and we often have parties together. Three days ago I was at a birthday party. We had a lot of fun. We were dancing, listening to music, playing games. When we sat down to have a birthday cake we didn't find it on the table! But believe me, there was a very happy dog under the table! Шаблон для написания письма на английском языке Noginsk Russia 04/06/16Dear…,I was so happy to get your letter! I can’t wait to meet you in July! I’m sorry I haven’t answered earlier but I was really busy with my school.You asked me to tell you about… Well, …By the way, …? …? …? (11 класс)Unfortunately, I’d better go now as I’ve got a lot of homework to do . Take care and keep in touch!All the best,Alex 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Ваш друг прислал вам письмо, но некоторые слова и выражения пропущены. Вставьте их по смыслу.(1) Thomas(2) besides(3) Thanks for your letter.(4) another thing(5) Randall Street(6) of course(7) by the way(8) to start with (9) wait to see you. (10) looking forward to meeting you ( (1) 23, ___________ Brighton UK 05/06/16 Dear Fred, (2)________________I was so glad to hear that you're going to visit us this summer here in Brighton. Let me tell you about some of the things we'll be able to do while you are here. (3)________________, we'll play paintball with my friends in the woods behind our house. (4)________________, you'll need old clothes for that but don't worry — you can wear some of mine. (5)________________we can do is go biking down to the land. It's a bit far from my house but I hope mother will let us go if my elder brother goes with us. You shouldn't feel shy about meeting my friends. They are nice guys and are (6)________________. (7)________________, your English is quite good, so you won't have any problems. (8)________________, could you bring some photos of your city's historical places? My friends and I are doing a project on history of other countries and the pictures will really help us to make it nicer. Well, I've to get back to my homework. Can't (9)________________. Best wishes, (10) ________________ Найдите 10 ошибок в письме (правописание, грамматика, структура письма). Напишите правильный вариант письма. 2nd March England, London Dear Berth, thank you for your letter. Sorry I haven't written for you before, as I'm up to my neck in business. Actually, I'm in need of pocket money like you and like you I'm crazy about computers. So, last month I started repairing my neighbours computers. They told their neighbours about that and so forth. Now I go to different people's houses on my bike to help them with any problems they have. This week I've already fixed 5 computers and the people seem happy to my service. At least I haven't had any complaints yet. Anyway, enough about me. How you about? Now I have to stop writing, because my mobile is ringing. Maybe, somebody needs my help in the computer! Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Nick При оформлении письма допущены ошибки. Исправь их.11.06.2016Noginsk, Russia Dear Andrew! Thanks for the letter. I was very glad to read it! My Mum bought me a laptop last year. It is great! Now I can play computer games everywhere! I love play computer games. My favorite game is «Need for speed». It is my hobby. My mum and my dad play computer games, too. Teenagers in my country dislike computer games. My friends and I like to play football and basketball.. Well, I must finish now because I have got a test tomorrow. Do you like to travel? Why? All the best, Anton Ivanov. Выберите из двух вариантов неформальный стиль личного письма. Dear (1) Mrs. Smith/Kate, Thank you for your letter. I'm really looking forward to coming to Canada. Well, (2) you asked me to tell you/ requested a few things about myself, so (3) please see below/ here goes! I'm tall, blonde, have green eyes. Like all models I'm a little bit (4) underweight/skinny. Anyway, (5) I've popped in a snap of me/I have enclosed a photograph, so that you can see for yourself. The good news is that we both have the same hobby. I am (6) fond of/crazy about modern theatre. Shall we (7) purchase tickets/buy some tickets and go together to a new play when I come? There are a lot of other things I am (8) anxious/dying to do when I get to your place. I've never tried fishing and boating, so perhaps you can teach me. Well, I'd better finish now and get this in the post. Hope to hear from you soon. (9) Best wishes/Sincerely yours, Jane Учебник Spotlight и задания «Личное письмо»